Fiction Adaptation: Film Drafts Progress

How Are the Drafts Going?

Below are three separate videos: my first draft, second draft and then the final draft.

First Edit

The first edit is literally just all the clips I want together to form the film. There's no soundtrack, narration and only little effects. This is just to enable me to see how long roughly the film will be plus  to see for the first time what it actually looks like when put together. This edit was sent to my composer, Joe Ruby, so that he can learn my film more plus to form the soundtrack around the film.

https://vimeo.com/114028213?email_id=Y2xpcF90cmFuc2NvZGVkfGNjMGI3ODRjZWM4MGJkNmU2NWIwMmU0ZjE1MGQ3M2UwNDcyfDI0NDExMjE0fDE0MTgxMzk2MzN8NzcwMQ==&utm_campaign=7701&utm_medium=clip-transcode_complete-finished-20120100&utm_source=email

2nd Edit

The second edit is a bit more finished - it has all the effects which I want for my film plus everything has been edited so that it runs smoothly and generally getting closer to completing for the final draft. This was also sent to Joe to show what changes I've made for my edit so he too can adapt his soundtrack for my film.

I also shortened the poem as I felt that it was a bit too long in some scenes (i.e. the first scene) so now my video is under 4 minutes. Everything here is in it's final order and is now awaiting a newer narration plus the soundtrack.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDymi4GxMuw&feature=youtu.be

I am now currently doing my final edit, which will be shown on a separate post. This will include a newer narration, the soundtrack, plus audio and white balancing to make sure that my film is consistent and to make sure there are no mistakes in terms of editing.