Below is my first draft of the essay for the digital news project.
Feedback
As you can see, I still haven't used Harvard referencing however this will be done shortly. I got into contact with Helen to show her my ideas from my essay and got a bit of feedback from her which was:- I asked if we had to include both theoretical and direct comparisons. She said that you don't need
to, therefore I will be focusing just on theoretical aspects as then this can be used as a key theme
throughout my essay.
- All in all my essay was forming well. All which I needed to do was to use Harvard referencing as
well as filling in my contents page plus to edit my introduction so that I mention that I'm talking
about theoretical aspects only.
I've also decided to add some images to reinforce some of my points.
After the feedback I worked on my essay to come to my final draft, which you can see below:
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