Friday, 9 May 2014



As mentioned before, my group and I have completely changed our original script. This is due to us changing our narrative as of course we are only focusing on one character (Jake) instead of 2 (not using the Girls Allowed fans).

Additionally, we based our script on our finished transcript - this means that our script is very accurate in terms of our documentary structure as we now have everything which we are going to use for our documentary.

The only problem with our new script is the commentary. Parts of the script will have something like 'COMM - NARRATOR' without having any speech. This is because we are going to edit our documentary together first and then add the commentary after, so that it is easier to know what we are going to say and where.

Of course, this is still subject to change however we shouldn't be changing the structure of our script much, as we have all come to an agreement of what we are going to edit.

Below is our updated and final version of the script:


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