Directions Unit: Directors Statement| Feedback

After handing in my first draft for my directors statement, Simon then gave me feedback on how to improve it. In general, the feedback I received was helpful as I now know what to add to my statement and how to improve it. Below is the feedback which I received:

Therefore, I will take in these notes and develop and improve my director's statement. For the theory part of my statement I plan to talk about a theory called the kuleshov effect and editing I plan to talk about continuity editing, which you will be able to see when I update my final draft for my directors statement. As well as this, more images of research will be incorporated to help show what I am trying to use in my film.